Friday 27 July, 2007
I love you........;)
And i don't want to fall to pieces
I just wanna sit and stare at you
I don't wanna talk about it
And I don't want a conversation
I just wanna cry in front of you
I don't wanna talk about it
'Cause I'm in love with you.
Lemme just hold you once
Touch you, and feel your presence
Gimme your shoulder to cry
There's a lot of things i wanna say
Say how much i love you everyday
Even when you are gone so far away
'Cause i'm in love with you
Let me hold your face in my hands
As my eyes cry all your tears
Lemme touch my lips to your cheeks
And look into your beautiful eyes
Tell you just how you mean
The entire world to me
'Cause i'm in love with you
'Cause i love you like i've never
And will never again
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loved it :)
hey! thanx dipti:)
nice blog....with nice words...
just take care of da fonts, templates nd add sum pics :)
good one.
Perhaps u can let go of the sms style in your poem.
:)
Keep goin'/
nice blog and a vry gud poem...the blog could do with some widgets and pictures...
No no, don't change the style.
It's hit a nerve , right now this was exactly what i didn't need to read. Really has hit home.
come on you just wrote down the lyrics of avril lavigne's "fall to pieces".....and the guys above it is obviously gonna hit nerves and all other stuff if its copied from a song...
sorry for being harsh but your other posts were pretty gud........
yeah! you r right mr,nowwhoisit. wat's wrong if the song help me to blurt out in describing my feelings it would be easy for anyone to understand nd moreover don`t you think that this idea itself is v-gud to express my feelings when i feel the same thing not every one write this way it's just that this thing click in my head nd so i used it 2 express my feelings and i donn think you r harsh it's just that u are famalier with the song and another thing is that people have different openion of their on i donn expect blogmates to only appriciate my writing skills but also welcome constrastive critisiam.
so no glee at heart 4om u boi:)
Nice blog... :)
great song..
but this way of writing, made it sound better.. ;)..
keep writing
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